Found 13 stronger alternatives to upgrade your writing.
Adding one more thing
Nuance: Addition
Simple and very common.
Boring
We packed extra pencils. Plus, we packed erasers.
Better
We packed extra pencils. Also, we packed erasers.
Adding one more thing
Nuance: Addition
Best inside one sentence.
Boring
We packed extra pencils. Plus, we packed erasers.
Better
We packed extra pencils, and we packed erasers.
Adding a point (speech)
Nuance: Extra point
Good for talking/presenting.
Boring
We packed extra pencils. Plus, we packed erasers.
Better
We packed extra pencils. Another thing is, we packed erasers.
Adding one more thing
Nuance: Addition
Rare at sentence start; use “too” at the end more often.
Boring
We packed extra pencils. Plus, we packed erasers.
Better
We packed extra pencils. Too, we packed erasers.
Adding a point (formal-ish)
Nuance: Extra information
More formal than also.
Boring
We packed extra pencils. Plus, we packed erasers.
Better
We packed extra pencils. Additionally, we packed erasers.
Adding another point
Nuance: Extra reason
Often means “also,” but can sound like an argument.
Boring
We packed extra pencils. Plus, we packed erasers.
Better
We packed extra pencils. Besides, we packed erasers.
Adding a point (clear)
Nuance: Addition
Great for school writing.
Boring
We packed extra pencils. Plus, we packed erasers.
Better
We packed extra pencils. In addition, we packed erasers.
Adding another point
Nuance: Extra bonus
Shows “and even more.”
Boring
We packed extra pencils. Plus, we packed erasers.
Better
We packed extra pencils. On top of that, we packed erasers.
Adding another point
Nuance: Extra bonus
Good for emphasis.
Boring
We packed extra pencils. Plus, we packed erasers.
Better
We packed extra pencils. What’s more, we packed erasers.
Adding (formal)
Nuance: Additional support
Formal; good for essays.
Boring
We packed extra pencils. Plus, we packed erasers.
Better
We packed extra pencils. Furthermore, we packed erasers.
Adding (formal)
Nuance: Added point
Formal; strong academic tone.
Boring
We packed extra pencils. Plus, we packed erasers.
Better
We packed extra pencils. Moreover, we packed erasers.
Adding emphasis
Nuance: Emphasis
Adds emphasis; slightly conversational.
Boring
We packed extra pencils. Plus, we packed erasers.
Better
We packed extra pencils. Not to mention, we packed erasers.
Adding a bonus (voice)
Nuance: Bonus
Best for narrative voice.
Boring
We packed extra pencils. Plus, we packed erasers.
Better
We packed extra pencils. To make matters even better, we packed erasers.