AP English Language and Composition2025

Apps such as Waze and Google Maps reroute drivers through residential neighborhoods to avoid traffic, transferring congestion from highways to quiet streets. Write an essay that argues your position on the extent to which navigation apps should be restricted from routing drivers through residential areas. (AP Lang FRQ 3 — Argument, 2025 released)

- AP Lang Argument essays are scored 6 points: thesis (1), evidence + commentary (4), sophistication (1). - The Power column models a 5–6/6 essay; the Boring column models a generic 3/6 essay with the same ideas but flat diction and monotone syntax. - Boring → Power swaps demonstrate the precise diction, multi-word collocations, and rhetorical sophistication AP readers reward. - The Power column upgrades word choice without changing meaning or grammar structure.

Navigation apps and neighborhood traffic — argument essay

The boring draft

Score: 3 / 6

Navigation apps are a big thing now, but they have also made a problem. By sending lots of frustrated drivers through quiet residential streets, these apps do not fix congestion so much as move it somewhere else. Cities should let neighborhoods to restrict algorithmic cut-through routing, because the bad things that happen to local residents is more than the marginal time savings of any individual driver.

The most easy to see harm is to child safety. Blocks that were once safe to walk on now have a lot of distracted, route-following drivers. In Leonia, New Jersey, residents said there were more near-collisions at school pickup after their township became a default Waze shortcut. A six-year-old's safe walk to school is not a fair price for shaving four minutes off a stranger's commute — and any framework that suggests otherwise has bad priorities.

A second concern is fairness. Interstate construction is paid for by all taxpayers, yet algorithmic rerouting makes a small set of residential streets to take the cost. Property values go down, ambient air quality deteriorates, and emergency-vehicle response times get longer. Critics may say that public streets are public infrastructure, and no resident "owns" the right to a quiet road — but cities have, for over a century, used zoning, weight limits, and traffic calming for exactly the same reason: some uses are not good for residential life. Algorithmic rerouting is simply the latest, and least regulated, of these uses.

A third dimension worth looking at is the asymmetry of information. The driver routed through a quiet street has, in practice, no idea that he is doing bad; the app interface presents him only with the arrival-time estimate and an efficient-looking blue line. The residents, conversely, see the harm directly but have no way through which to register complaint, because the rerouting decision was made in an algorithm they cannot inspect. This asymmetry — big harm distributed across one population, with full agency and zero awareness concentrated in another — is precisely the structural feature that good regulation exists to correct. Markets that distribute costs invisibly are markets whose participants cannot, by construction, hold one another accountable.

It is worth noting that this kind of harm was simply not possible in the era of paper maps. A driver in 1985 might, on rare occasion, cut through a residential neighborhood because he knew the area; he could not, however, do so at the algorithmic scale that turns a quiet block into a thoroughfare. The harm we are seeing is not the normal friction of urban life but a recent and technology-specific phenomenon, and it is therefore the proper subject of specific regulation. Treating it as an unsolvable feature of modernity makes accepting a harm whose vector was, until very recently, not there.

A balanced remedy is not to ban the apps but to make them to honor municipal "do-not-route" flags during school hours and peak emergencies, exposed through a public API. Such a rule keeps efficient routing on genuine arterials while saving the small fraction of streets that bear the hidden cost. The technology that caused the problem is, with minimal effort, able to solving it.

In the end, the convenience of one commuter should not outweigh the safety of fifty children. A small regulatory adjustment can make public mobility with the peace of the residential street — and a healthy democracy should be willing to demand it.

The power upgrade

Score: 5 / 6

Navigation apps have become indispensable for daily commuting, but they have also engineered a new species of urban harm. By funneling fleets of frustrated drivers through quiet residential streets, these apps do not alleviate congestion so much as displace it onto households that never asked to absorb it. Cities should empower neighborhoods to restrict algorithmic cut-through routing, because the measurable harm inflicted on local residents categorically outweighs the marginal time savings of any individual driver.

The most conspicuous harm is to child safety. Blocks that were once negligible-risk pedestrian corridors now absorb constant streams of distracted, route-following drivers. In Leonia, New Jersey, residents reported a surge in near-collisions at school pickup in the months after their township became a default Waze shortcut. A six-year-old's safe walk to school is not a defensible price for shaving four minutes off a stranger's commute — and any framework that suggests otherwise has inverted priorities.

A second concern is distributive equity. Interstate construction is underwritten by all taxpayers, yet algorithmic rerouting conscripts a small set of residential streets to absorb the cost. Property values erode, ambient air quality deteriorates, and emergency-vehicle response times stretch dangerously thin. Critics may counter that public streets are public infrastructure, and no resident "owns" the right to a quiet road — but cities have, for over a century, deployed zoning, weight limits, and traffic calming for exactly the same reason: some uses are fundamentally incompatible with residential life. Algorithmic rerouting is simply the latest, and least regulated, of these uses.

A third dimension worth emphasising is the asymmetry of information. The driver routed through a quiet street has, in practice, no idea that he is doing local harm; the app interface presents him only with the arrival-time estimate and an efficient-looking blue line. The residents, conversely, witness the harm directly but have no institutional channel through which to register complaint, because the rerouting decision was made in an algorithm they cannot inspect. This asymmetry — consequential harm distributed across one population, with full agency and zero awareness concentrated in another — is precisely the structural feature that good regulation exists to correct. Markets that distribute costs invisibly are markets whose participants cannot, by construction, hold one another accountable.

It is worth noting that this kind of harm was simply impossible to inflict in the era of paper maps. A driver in 1985 might, on rare occasion, cut through a residential neighborhood because he knew the area; he could not, however, do so at the algorithmic scale that turns a quiet block into a thoroughfare. The harm we are witnessing is not the inherited friction of urban life but a recent and technology-specific phenomenon, and it is therefore the proper subject of narrowly tailored regulation. Treating it as an unsolvable feature of modernity amounts to accepting a harm whose vector was, until very recently, absent.

A balanced remedy is not to ban the apps but to require them to honor municipal "do-not-route" flags during school hours and peak emergencies, exposed through a public API. Such a rule preserves efficient routing on genuine arterials while shielding the small fraction of streets that bear the hidden cost. The technology that engineered the problem is, with minimal effort, capable of solving it.

In the end, the convenience of one commuter should not silently override the safety of fifty children. A small regulatory adjustment can reconcile public mobility with the inviolability of the residential street — and a healthy democracy should be unembarrassed to demand it.