Gaokao (National Paper A)2024

You are going to give a presentation in your English class on the topic "Development of Transport in China," based on three images: shared bikes, the high-speed train, and new energy cars. Write the script of your presentation in about 100 words. (Gaokao 2024, 全国甲卷)

- Stay within the gaokao syllabus — no out-of-scope words that flag the essay. - Word count must meet the requirement; significantly going over or under loses points. - The Power column upgrades word choice without changing meaning or grammar structure.

Development of transport in China — class presentation

The boring draft

Score: 14 / 25 (Band C)

Good morning, everyone. Today I would like to talk about the rapid development of transport in China through three things.

First, shared bikes. Once parked everywhere in confusion, they are now made better through scan-to-park technology, making short trips clean and convenient.

Second, the high-speed train. With more than forty thousand kilometres of track, it now joins almost every major city and makes journeys that once took a day shorter to a few hours.

Third, new energy cars. Domestic brands have made a large share of the market and help air pollution at the same time.

Together these changes show how innovation changes daily life. Thank you.

The power upgrade

Score: 20 / 25 (Band A)

Good morning, everyone. Today I would like to speak about the rapid development of transport in China through three examples.

First, shared bikes. Once parked everywhere in confusion, they are now organised through scan-to-park technology, making short trips clean and convenient.

Second, the high-speed train. With more than forty thousand kilometres of track, it now connects almost every major city and cuts journeys that once took a day short to a few hours.

Third, new energy cars. Domestic brands have captured a large share of the market and reduce air pollution at the same time.

Together these changes reveal how innovation reshapes daily life. Thank you.